Industrial Park

10th Mar, 2021

Industrial Park
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10th Mar 2021, 11:23 AM

view Spell's profile

Might be late to ask, but do you all prefer 'named' pages rather than page numbers for page titles? This is the first comic I've done page titles.

I had to look at so many different industrial park and manufacturing areas to get a good feel for this area. It's vaguely based on a few in my area. Also I hate garage doors and steps. Both of them are dumb and keeping them in scale is hard.

The problem, then, is that now that I know what these things look like, I know if it's wrong :( boo

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10th Mar 2021, 11:32 AM

view mitchellbravo's profile

I think ur author comment got cut off, but I like both when possible- ch/page numbers and also a unique word title. Its mostly just gingerbread but it does make it easier for someone who wants to refer back to a specific page, seeing rhe unique titles can help give clues that they're close to the right storyline without having to dig too much. It also can add a little Easter egg if you have consecutive titles that play off each other or callback titles referencing an earlier page.


10th Mar 2021, 5:24 PM

view Spell's profile

OOF it did. Future me started a bunch of descriptions for pages and apparently stopped right there so that's pretty neat. I've amended it with were I think I was going!

Anyway, good feedback. I think I'll implement that! Best of both worlds thing blah blah


10th Mar 2021, 11:41 AM

view sigpig's profile

This title set the scene. Looking at Panel 1, it could be anything from a military base, to a port, to an industrial park.
Maybe you could title each scene the same (ie: Industrial Park 1, 2, etc) or each location. This could pare down the number of titles needed. That could also help if you get into concurrent scenes or flashbacks, for example...


10th Mar 2021, 5:27 PM

view Spell's profile

Interesting insights! I have uh, a lot of locations and too many revisits I think to utilize this well. But I appreciate the feedback!

Thankfully I don't have to fight with a flashback until next chapter yay me


10th Mar 2021, 12:37 PM

view Microraptor's profile

While I won't insist on it, I say named pages are fun!


10th Mar 2021, 5:27 PM

view Spell's profile

Yay names! >:D now if only I could remember alt text existing and utilize it cheekily on a regular basis. Too bad I'm not that witty on the regular


13th Mar 2021, 11:00 AM

view junoro's profile

He hasn't even died yet and I'm like RIP


17th Mar 2021, 11:56 PM

view lirvilas's profile

whut, I didn't comment on this page?

completely concur with Junoro, that dude is KIA even if he doesn't know it yet